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Esthie
4/1/2020 07:23:53 am
One day a famous actress with no education at all named Barb (she was obviously a Nicki Minaj can cause that’s why her name is barb) had a conversation with a smart person. After a lot of research about the random conversation they had she had an idea for an invention that no one would be able to see because she is in quarantine. She was nervous to tell her insta fans about the idea but she told them on her insta live. Barb’s creation was called the quarantine cure. According to Barb it cured your boredom while in quarantine. It had face masks for relaxation, paint to bring out your imagination, and it also had some board games and Nicki Minaj posters ( she put Nicki Minaj posters because why not). Barb is so smart that she forgot she can’t get out of her house to get supplies. She was so furious that she ripped up her Nicki Minaj #1 fan poster. She really let the tension get to her. Then it hit her!(no like it literally hit her a Nicki Minaj 2020 poster flew at her) Barb was going to make a main attraction for all the Barbs out there! She was going to put Nicki posters all outside her house and she was gonna make people pay to touch one! Her imaginary friend said the idea was humorous but Barb was not gonna listen to her imaginary friend. She started waving a flag outside and was screaming NICKI 2020!!!! It worked Barb had made $4832848929274824719 that day ( it cost $50 dollars to touch each poster). And that my friends is Barb’s story.
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Erin
4/1/2020 07:51:00 am
OMG I loved that it was so great lol.
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Esthie
4/1/2020 07:53:51 am
It took a lot of thought
Eva
4/1/2020 08:01:21 am
Wow Esthie I loved the part where you said something hit her, and a nicki minaj poster literally hit her!
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Esthie
4/1/2020 08:11:38 am
That part was one of my favorites 𝒮𝓉𝒶𝓇𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓅𝓈 🚀 𝓌𝑒𝓇𝑒 𝓂𝑒𝒶𝓃𝓉 𝓉𝑜 𝒻𝓁𝓎 𝒽𝒶𝓃𝒹𝓈 𝓊𝓅 🙌 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓉𝑜𝓊𝒸𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝓀𝓎 💫✨
kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:27:54 am
i love barb esthie she seems really rich too!
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Esthie
4/1/2020 08:45:20 am
She is really rich! She is also the biggest Barb!( nicki Minaj fan)Uh oh 😨 Back 👉to them 😎 I lead ✊ the pack 🐺so my backs to them🙌🙄 Yep, 😍the queen's👸🏽 back, 🤪what's happenin'?🤔
Esthie
4/1/2020 08:48:37 am
I just realized at the beginning I put Nicki Minaj can instead of fan
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Isabel
4/1/2020 08:50:08 am
Barb is like the smartest person on earth.
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Esthie
4/1/2020 08:57:38 am
She is very smart this😌one✨is💅🏽for🤷🏾♀️the 💯boys🎾with💍the 🚴booming🏅 system 👩🏾🦱 top 👨🏿🍳down🎎ac🎆with🥦the👐🏽cooler system
Molly Bruton
4/1/2020 09:11:31 am
Where does she live
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Esthie
4/1/2020 09:17:24 am
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Nate
4/1/2020 09:37:21 am
Good story
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Esthie
4/1/2020 09:40:49 am
Thank you 𝒮𝓉𝒶𝓇𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓅𝓈 🚀 𝓌𝑒𝓇𝑒 𝓂𝑒𝒶𝓃𝓉 𝓉𝑜 𝒻𝓁𝓎
Esthie
4/1/2020 09:37:55 am
If anyone is confused when I answer a question the emojis and stuff that comes after is Nicki Minaj lyrics
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Matt
4/1/2020 10:22:47 am
That's at least over $4,000,000,000,000,000 dollars. How long did it take you to do the math?
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Esthie
4/1/2020 10:24:29 am
Well actually I just pressed random numbers
Julia
4/1/2020 10:30:17 am
I really like your story because when i saw Barb was obviously a Nicki Minaj I laughed so hard
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Esthie
4/1/2020 10:32:09 am
Thank you for liking it.
Julia
4/1/2020 10:37:51 am
lol np
Erin
4/1/2020 07:49:14 am
One day I was walking down my street, and all of a sudden this creepy man came up to me and he was driving a white van. I wasn’t too sure about this guy so I walked away from him and the van. Now I wasn’t sure I wanted to meet this guy face to face, but I was pretty sure I had seen him in a famous movie. My dad was talking about it the other day. It was called “fast and furious” or something like that. I was sure there was an explanation about why this guy started chasing me, but I ran as fast as I possibly could. I was so nervous. I ran to my house, locked the door, and hid in my room. All of a sudden, I headed banging on the door. Was this guy planning on an invasion?! I didn’t even know what his occupation was either. I thought about calling the police, but as soon as I went to grab my phone, the door came crashing down! Now I had to make a decision- it was to either jump out the window, or go down and confront this guy. Of course I chose to jump out the window. So o did, and sure enough, his white van was parked in front of my house. Now I had good education, and my mom always told me to go with my gut feeling. My guts didn’t feel so good about this man though. I ran and ran some more. All I could think about was that guy creeping around my house. What did he want?! I was also worried about my dog. She had been lost for the past 2 days. I didn’t know where on earth she was now. However, I did know that this guy is after me. I saw him chasing after me. Ok and NOW I was really scared. I tried to pretend that this was just my humorous imagination, and I tried to put myself into a state of relaxation, but it wasn’t working. All of a sudden, I saw this animal-like figure running towards me. It was Hazel! My lost dog! She ran up to the man and started to bite and attack him. I could see tension boiling up in her, and boy was she mad at that guy. She barked and growled and clawed and bit him. Now this guy was on the ground. I told Hazel to stop for a sec and she did. I asked him what he wanted from me, and he said he wanted to take me to McDonald’s. I said “ “umm I don’t know you so no thanks.” He said “aw man! I was hoping to get a Big Mac!” I said “ok we’ll go get one then.” He then said ok and let me be! Yay. (Oh and btw, this story isn’t true.)
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Eva
4/1/2020 07:56:33 am
Wow Erin that was a really creative story. I especially liked the ending!
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Erin
4/1/2020 09:18:54 am
Thx I actually tried on this one! lol
kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:25:02 am
wow erin that was a long story but a great on! i loved the part with the dog!
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Erin
4/1/2020 09:19:16 am
Hehe thx!
natalie
4/1/2020 08:59:56 am
wow I love it
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Erin
4/1/2020 09:19:56 am
Thank you
Nate
4/1/2020 09:26:20 am
This sounds like a weird horror movie
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Erin
4/1/2020 06:38:38 pm
Haha that’s what I thought
Isabel
4/1/2020 09:32:04 am
Did he just get a Big Mac?
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Erin
4/1/2020 06:39:28 pm
Umm I’m not sure. He didn’t tell me! How dare he!
Tess
4/1/2020 09:36:24 am
That was a great story!
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:37:30 am
I love your story!
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Julia
4/1/2020 09:43:01 am
I love how Hazel came to the rescue at the end and I loved that the guy just wanted McDonald's. It is making me hungry now.
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Erin
4/1/2020 06:40:15 pm
Haha thx
Matt
4/1/2020 11:50:36 am
Where did the dog go???
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Erin
4/1/2020 06:41:21 pm
I took her home with me
Isaac
4/1/2020 01:53:36 pm
This was a scary story!
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Esthie
4/1/2020 07:54:40 am
When I saw white van I knew it was gonna be a great story
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Erin
4/1/2020 09:19:38 am
Hahaha ikr!
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Patrick
4/1/2020 08:04:37 am
I thought the dog part was funny
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Erin
4/1/2020 09:20:36 am
Thank you I thought it would be funny
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kaitlyn faragoi
4/1/2020 08:23:26 am
Once upon a time i was stuck in time. This is my story about the whole thing. It all started in 2020. i was in my room doing my science. I thought it was easy so i rushed through it. my mom came upstairs to put her laundry in the closet. i called her in ans told her i was almost done with my homework! she was very proud of me, she said i hope everything was correct! i said it was because i looked in my book. she said ok i sure hope so! once i was finished i wanted to go to dunkin donutes. So i ran downstairs and was gonna say 'can i go get some donuts.' But what i saw was un bear able. it was my little cousin (who keep in mind lives in mokena illinois) he was dancing with a swim suit that said my name is bob on it! HIS NAME IS JOHNNY! I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW HE GOT HERE! AND HOW HE LEARNED TO HULA DANCE! Anyways i ran downstairs and said hey i need some donuts so can i go. my little cousin said sure! in a 87 year old voice. i was like ok i gonna go does anyone want something no one responded they were just so tied up in tied hula dancing. So i left thinking that everything would be fin but NO! That wasn't the case. When i was outside the first thing i saw was 5 men in army uniforms ready to bust into the neighbors house. i just ignored them because it was a regular appearance. the army people would bust in they would not believe anything our neighbors said and bring them to court. the neighbors would win and they would go on their day. So i was already down the block in the curb to cross the street when i saw a furious person that had a foot made out of noodles and a head made out of ducks. Ya ducks! once i crossed the street i remembered that i only had one dollar! the donuts were 2$ so i headed back to the house once i got there it was even weirder. MY COUSIN DECIDED THAT IT WOULD BE A GOOD IDEA TO FIND A FAMOUS PERSON TO HULA DANCE WITH! SO HE WAS DANCING OUTSIDE NOW WITH A RAINBOW SWIMSUIT ON AND TRYING TO GET FAMOUS SO A FAMOUS PERSON WOULD RECOGNIZE HIM! I RAN IN SIDE AND THAT IS WHEN I GOT TRANSPORTED TO A DIFFERENT TIME! It was the time of 1423 around CAVEMAN times! so i had to figure out how in the world to fix it! so i first had to realize that i was in an escape room that was a mile long and if i didn't figure it out i would be sent to the real 1423! So i had to gather up info to crack the first code! the first bit of info was a a Dino with a chicken nugget on its head and a tail made out of pork. he was also singing frosty the snowman. i knew it! I knew how to crack the code! it was singing into the microphone frosty the snow man and clicking the food option chicken, because, there was 3 options of food, a cake, a single ramen noodle, ad a chicken leg. anyways to quiken up the story i had to make an invention that was humorous. and i also had to make an attraction that was full of education and explanation. once I did all that i went to a final destination. it was 2015 and that was when i realized that was the year i had my worst birthday ever! so i had to fix it. so i didn't really remember that day and what happened but knew it was really bad. so i got there and it was way worse than i thought. It wasn't that i didn't like my presents it was that it was the weirdest birthday ever. the first thing was i got a chicken like a live chicken with purple feathers. then within 3 seconds the chicken died right on the spot so i gave it a shot and it didn't die. There were 6 other things that happened but i wont t\list them because it could get pretty disturbing. anyways i fixed everything even the tension between the chicken and the duck. trust me that was the hardest. that chicken did not like the duck. well I'm home now and my cousin is still hula dancing in our front yard. thank u for your time and for listening to me.
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Gianna
4/1/2020 08:33:53 am
wow your story is really crazy
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:35:51 am
i know it took so long u dont even know!
Esthie
4/1/2020 08:46:46 am
That story was so silly and I loved it Uh oh 😨 Back 👉to them 😎 I lead ✊ the pack 🐺so my backs to them🙌🙄 Yep, 😍the queen's👸🏽 back, 🤪what's happenin'?🤔
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:55:04 am
what are u talking about
Esthie
4/1/2020 09:30:10 am
It’s lyrics to a Nicki Minaj song
Tess
4/1/2020 08:55:21 am
I really like your story! It was really long and crazy
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kaiylyn
4/1/2020 08:58:16 am
thank u very much
natalie
4/1/2020 09:01:09 am
I love it I can tell it took a long time
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:09:43 am
thank u it took a lot of thinking but it was rly fun
Isabel
4/1/2020 09:06:31 am
This is a masterpiece. Period.
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:09:03 am
lol
Eva
4/1/2020 10:29:49 am
I agree with Isabel!
Erin
4/1/2020 09:22:31 am
The part with your cousin is funny
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Kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:29:28 am
Thanks lol
Nate
4/1/2020 09:30:46 am
That was a pretty good story
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Kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:32:42 am
Thank u
Matt
4/1/2020 11:57:02 am
Where does anyone have the time to hula dance? Oh, I forgot, it's quarantine.
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Kaitlyn
4/1/2020 01:17:18 pm
Lol that’s funny I totally agree
Isaac
4/1/2020 02:00:38 pm
I liked when your little cousin said, "sure in a 87 year old's voice".
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Kaitlyn
4/2/2020 07:21:30 am
I know he is only 3 years old lol
kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:26:50 am
finally this took so long hopefully u guys like it!
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Patrick
4/1/2020 08:35:52 am
It was worth it and I think it is very crazy
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:37:46 am
thank u your story was awesome too
Patrick
4/1/2020 08:30:48 am
One day a famous scientist wanted to make an invention. He was going to make an attraction...a couch that was shaped and looked like a whale. It would bring relaxation to everyone who used it. The whale would be equipped with many gadgets that gave people the things they asked for. It could hold up to 2 people and give about 3 things at once with its big arms. You could also set it to a certain destination up to 3 miles max. The only thing the scientist was nervous about was the very low battery. He thought it would make people furious because of the battery. So the scientist went to a battery shop and asked for the biggest and longest battery they had. He got it but it would take some education on how to use it. The battery was rechargeable but if you charge it too much it will break. The scientist thought about another way to have the battery last long. He would make 2 of the giant batteries. Because of his giant imagination, his creation would change people’s lives and make them less independent and more lazy. After he plans this out, he will make various amounts of them and sell them to many people
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:33:37 am
i love the scientists idea a couch that looked like whale lol!
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Molly Bruton
4/1/2020 08:46:36 am
I would want to see that irl
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Eva
4/1/2020 08:57:25 am
Wait Patrick, I like that invention can you send me one while I'm in quarantine?
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:59:51 am
lol
Erin
4/1/2020 09:26:10 am
Lol Eva ikr
Tess
4/1/2020 08:59:38 am
I really like your story and I wish I had that couch!
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Erin
4/1/2020 09:23:29 am
Ooo very creative!
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Isabel
4/1/2020 09:34:45 am
Amazing, spectacular, show-stopping, I’m buying one-
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Seamus
4/1/2020 02:19:20 pm
So where can I get one
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Esthie
4/1/2020 08:47:41 am
That was a good story
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Eva
4/1/2020 08:51:02 am
One day it was a little girl's birthday, and absolutely everything that could go wrong went wrong. The family was on their way to meet a famous person, but then there was an alien invasion. The worst part was that the family's house was marked as the alien's destination, so with fear the family quickly evacuated.Eva
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natalie
4/1/2020 09:01:58 am
I love it
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:06:17 am
I really like your story Eva it is very funny and creative!
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:11:17 am
loll
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Eva
4/1/2020 10:19:39 am
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Erin
4/1/2020 09:26:45 am
So interesting!
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Eva
4/1/2020 11:53:54 am
All of your stories were awesome too!
Patrick
4/1/2020 06:03:37 pm
I really like the idea of aliens
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Gianna Gute
4/1/2020 08:56:47 am
one day i went to sleep and had a very weird dream that i was some how famous because i won a election on becoming president and everyone loved me.i had no word or any explanation and everyone wanted to have a conversation with me. i knew this had to be my imagination but i didn't know because it felt so real.But then i realized it was not the best thing ever being president because everyone is in your space and invasion.Then for some reason there was a cat in my office and i was soooooooo happy because i love cats so much but my moo would probably be furious.but then i realized i dont have to do any education i can just have relaxation with my cat!! some people thought i was being humorous that with my occupation i made and invention to cure corona!! i have tried to various times but i finally did it.i was very nervous to tell everyone because everyones tension grew but i did tell everyone and they were so happy. and then i made a new amusentpark and everyone loved it and because it is my birthday tomorrow they all got me some gifts.and i was so happy but i really want to figure out if i am in a dream or not but i dont know how to figure it out and how i am dreaming about all these people but it seems and feels so real and i have never had a dream like this.but then i thought for awhile that we only sleep and night so it might turn night in my dream and it will be day in the morning and that would wake me up because of the sunlight.so i tried going to sleep in my dream and when i woke up i was still a president. so i asked the people around me and they said we werent in a dream this is the real world so they probably think we are in the real world but i know we are not.so then 2 days after i was walking around and i found this weird portal so i went into it because i wanted to see what was on the other side and i was in my own home but then i realized i forgot my cat and i was soooooo mad!!!! but anyways by mom would probably not let me keep it but i was still happy because it was my birthday.
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 08:59:12 am
wow gianna u must have some pretty crazy dreams lol
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Eva
4/1/2020 09:04:32 am
I wish I had those kinds of dreams!
Eva
4/1/2020 09:01:23 am
Gianna, I loved that you threw in something about cats, and i thought that part was funny too!
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natalie
4/1/2020 09:02:52 am
I love it so much
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:08:46 am
I love your story G i thought it was very funny!
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Erin
4/1/2020 09:28:31 am
I’m more of a dog person, however the cat in this story was so funny! It was great. Good job
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Molly Bruton
4/1/2020 08:59:23 am
Happy Birthday
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kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:08:03 am
lol
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Tessa
4/1/2020 09:15:43 am
I loved your story Gianna
Tessa
4/1/2020 09:13:11 am
One day a girl was going to school to get her education.But then she made a decision that she did not wan to go to school.She had to give an explanation why.She told the teacher that she just didn't want to go to school today. The teacher said "ok, go do whatever you want to do and have a great time!'.So the girl wanted to go to a party during the day and then she texted Beyonce if she could go to the party that she was hosting.Beyonce said 'Yes ,of course!'.So then the girl got ready to go to the party and a limo picked her up to go to the destination.When the girl got there she started to make conversation and everyone thought that she was very humorous, in a good way.The girl started to walk around the party and she found a relaxation room and she wanted to go in the room with Beyonce so she invited her into the room and they got there nails done together.After they made a creation of cake for the party that everyone loved.After that Beyonce had an election for who could be her new best friend and the girl won and now she's famous all around the world.
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:40:49 am
Tessa I love your story its awesome!
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natalie
4/1/2020 10:26:10 am
I love it ,it is awesome
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Eva
4/1/2020 10:34:28 am
That girl is so lucky because now I want to meet Beyonce! i also really liked your story!
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Julia
4/1/2020 09:19:46 am
This story takes place in a castle, destination is Avondale. The castle was home to the Baggins’ family and an attraction in Avondale. The Baggins’s family had various responsibilities in the town. Daddy Baggins’s occupation was head hobbit to fishing. The Baggins’s were getting ready for an invasion in their land. The tension was high in the castle. Baby Baggins was the most nervous of all. The family had a conversation about how they were going to prepare for the attack. There was a recent election in their town, and a new wizard is now the leader. The old leader, Gandalf, was famous for his mind. The wizard’s education consisted of magic and potions. He had a vivid imagination for making potions. Gandalf often had exhibitions for new and old inventions. Daddy Baggins had a humorous idea. He made the decision to ask the wizard to help the family. The wizard was furious at first, but then decided to help them. The wizard was intrigued to make an invention. After much thought and many explanations, he was finished. Gandalf’s creation was finished! Gandalf came to Baggins’s castle and they all just waited. The next day, the sirens went off, which meant the invasion was near. The entire family hid while Gandalf stood outside. The humans got close and Gandalf cast his potion. The entire castle was covered under a protection spell and the humans were all turned to ash. The town and castle were saved. The Baggins’s family did not know how to thank Gandalf. Gandalf did not want anything from them but for the Baggins’s family to have some relaxation now.
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:42:58 am
I loved your story a lot I thought it was very creative!
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Julia
4/1/2020 09:44:51 am
Thx I am watching the Lord of the Rings movie right now too!
Esthie
4/1/2020 09:21:00 am
I loved that story!
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Isabel
4/1/2020 09:27:35 am
One night, I was trying to fall asleep, but I was hungry. So I rolled out of bed,
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Kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:30:36 am
This is rly funny lol
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Isabel
4/1/2020 09:36:59 am
You lNow it iS
Tess
4/1/2020 09:47:54 am
I loved your story I thought it was very funny!
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Julia
4/1/2020 09:48:24 am
I really love everything about this story and it really suits you. lol
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Eva
4/1/2020 10:40:43 am
I thought your story was so funny, and now I'm in the mood for pizza!
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:31:10 am
Today I made a decision to go a famous attraction destination. I was very nervous to tell my parents because I thought they might be furious that I was leaving, but they were not. There were various rides there but my favorite ride was the one that was a creation with the most imagination. Later that night I went to go see a comedy show so I could get some relaxation time. The show was humorous and it made me so happy. Then I went to the alien invasion ride which was an amazing invention. The trip was wonderful and if there was ever a vote on the best attraction park, this place would definitely win the election.
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Kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:34:03 am
I love the alien ride it seems fun
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:48:33 am
:)
Julia
4/1/2020 09:53:59 am
I like how you made sure your parents were alright with you leaving the house during this Covid-19 pandemic.
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Tess
4/1/2020 01:18:10 pm
No it is not during quarantine if it was I would not leave the house.
Eva
4/1/2020 10:25:37 am
I wish i could go to that attraction park because it sounds amazing!
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natalie
4/1/2020 10:31:41 am
it seans like you hade alot of fun that day
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Molly
4/1/2020 09:40:50 am
One day I was going on a walk and suddenly I saw a metal hunk of junk appear in front of me. I ran into it and the door opened. The machine said “I am your invention of relaxation in the future. This will make you famous.” We then had a conversation about how I don’t need education going forward. The machine was furious that I was still hadn’t made my decision. My decision was to go in the future, or know what my future is and try to fulfill it. It would be bad if I stayed. The junk pile gave me an explanation. It said that I will try but not succeed in life. I was nervous but I went with it. I thought that this will bring me back to cavemen time. Eventually we stopped and I saw a Wooly Mammoth . That was just my imagination. I was in the future. It kinda looked like the Aladdin time period so ,post-apocalyptic. I never met me or my creation again. I was stuck in time.
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Kaitlyn
4/1/2020 09:42:06 am
I like when u saw the mammoth
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Tess
4/1/2020 09:51:01 am
I really liked your story I thought it was very creative!
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Molly
4/1/2020 10:55:04 am
Ty tess
Julia
4/1/2020 09:58:48 am
I like how a pile of random junk just appeared right in front of you and how i just started talking to you.
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natalie
4/1/2020 10:33:58 am
I thought the story was creative
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Maddie
4/1/2020 10:57:29 am
I really liked your story
Natalie Theusch
4/1/2020 10:21:27 am
There was a famous invention at an exhibition and it looked like the person who made the invention was nervous. It looked like a great creation. She said it was occupation to invent things. She needed a education degree in science. She said she was going to be destination to New York to show her stuff there. My invasion of what I thought the invention would be was way off. Her explanation on why she made it was that she was board so decided to make something.
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Julia
4/1/2020 10:26:34 am
I like how she was bored so she just made something.
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natalie
4/2/2020 06:10:52 am
thank you
Jimmy
4/1/2020 10:23:45 am
One day I was walking to school, when all of a sudden BOOM I got hit by a limo! I didn't get hurt but I was really nervous to see who was inside. Was it someone famous? I couldn't tell until they stepped out of the car. I thought it was just my imagination but it wasn't. It was The Rock!! I couldn't believe my eyes. He said sorry kid I was trying to get to my destination, my new zip line park. Then he asked hey do you want to come with and check out the new attractions? I made the decision to skip school even though i knew Mr. Miller would be furious. The Rock's zip line park was a place I've never seen before. It had various animals there, like alligators, snakes, ostriches, and giraffes. Each zip line course you had to fly over the animals. I thought this invention was so cool. All of a sudden the sky became dark and there was a SHARKNADO! An invasion of sharks fell to the Earth. I turned to The Rock waiting for an explanation. He said we need to save the world from the sharknado. Then i woke up and realized it was just another crazy dream.
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Eva
4/1/2020 10:36:59 am
I thought the whole story was great, but the beginning really grabbed my attention!
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Julia
4/1/2020 10:41:54 am
The story was really good and i loved how you brought The Rock in it.
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Isaac
4/1/2020 02:04:25 pm
I would of liked to skip school to go with The Rock.
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Nate
4/1/2020 11:25:01 am
Today I had to do a lot of chores and stuff because it's garbage day. Today was my turn to pickup my dogs poop. And I was always sick of doing chores because I had to do homework. And over the weekend I built a new invention that cleans and does chores for me. My brothers were furious that they had to do chores while my robot did everything for me, so they made their own robots. So now me and my brothers have relaxation and don't have to do chores, and my parents were confused and asked for an explanation since it made my dog freak out. My brothers and I had a conversation and picked the decision to do chores by ourselves so our dog doesn't get freaked out anymore. We then reached our destination and gave our creations to a museum and the robots became famous in the museum and became a huge attraction.
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Eva
4/1/2020 11:51:23 am
I thought your story was fun and creative! If you remember how to build that robot, and have some free time I would like one of those robots please!
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Maddie
4/1/2020 01:34:15 pm
If I had a robot that did chores I wouldn’t give it up to the museum for anything
Seamus
4/1/2020 01:36:26 pm
I wish I had that device it seemed very cool and I would love it because I’m so lazy.
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Matt
4/1/2020 11:45:05 am
Once there was a famous sports commentator named Jeff. Jeff had a lot of friends and had fun with them. While he was commenting for a big game, a group of lasers started falling from the sky like rain. Something hacked into the speakers and it said, “ Puny humans! We are attacking Earth!! Surrender to our invasion!!!” Everyone ran for their lives, just to get captured by robotic claws. Everyone knew that the decision to live was not theirs.
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Nate
4/1/2020 11:56:25 am
Cool story matt
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Eva
4/1/2020 12:00:28 pm
I feel like the character Jeff fits you as a sports commentator, and I thought the story was very interesting!
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Maddie
4/1/2020 01:32:40 pm
I love how right when he looked at them he puked
Maddie
4/1/2020 01:31:09 pm
I want Portillo’s! But now I can’t because of quarantine and it’s making me furious because my mom keeps giving me various reasons why I can’t even though she likes it to! She said I have to use my imagination and try to make something like it so me and my sister Nora did then we started a fire and got grounded. It was Nora’s decision to put then french fries in for an extra hour so they were crispy not mine! So I gave my parents an explanation why I shouldn’t be grounded so I got ungrounded. So me and my sisters had some relaxation time and had a very humorous conversation. And Nora is still nervous about burning the house down so me and her went on a walk for an hour and a half. But when I got back I through away my water an I saw 3 Portillo’s!
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Seamus
4/1/2020 01:38:28 pm
That was a cool story and I liked it a lot. Jeff seems a lot like you because you’re the best sports commentator in Oak Lawn
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Isaac
4/1/2020 01:48:57 pm
There was once a famous person named James Charles. He made a decision to make this CRAZY invention called the James Charles pallet. It was a cool creation. He was so proud of himself that he made another one. He had a conversation with his friends on how he wanted it. So he thought for a couple days then he had an idea. He was really nervous about his idea. He had an explanation on how he was going to make his other pallet. So a week later he started making the other pallet. He was having trouble designing his pallet so he used his imagination. After he was almost done with his pallet he took a day off for relaxation. While he was relaxed he felt a little humorous about how his pallet was going to be ugly. So after he was done relaxing he went back. All he needed was to add color so he went to the store. He arrived to his destination. There was a invasion in the store because of the lockdown that was going to start because of COVID-19. He got the colors and went back home. He added color after color. Finally he was done so he put it in the store. After people saw this there was a HUGE attraction to his new pallet. He decided to stay home for a while to practice social distancing. The end!
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natalie
4/2/2020 06:12:32 am
I like your story
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Seamus
4/1/2020 02:15:35 pm
I was at a basketball tournament and I had to guard their best player. He was famous all around the state for his signature crossover. It was the championship game and my three friends and Patrick were in the game. The guy I had to guard was named Covid and his number was 19. This was no exhibition game, so I played my hardest the whole game. He was doing OK but for the most part I was playing good defense. I was nervous to start the game. It was a close game but especially tight at the end of the game. We won on a last second shot from my friend. After the game, I realized the person I was guarding was named Covid and his number was 19. I was furious and I remembered he was coughing. It didn’t take a person with a college education to figure out he had the virus. We arrived at our destination and the doctors treated me. But I felt fine and didn't have the virus. My mom thought it was humorous. The doctor and I had a conversation and then he gave me an explanation.He told me all I needed was a little bit of relaxation.
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Nate
4/1/2020 04:37:22 pm
That was very funny
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Eva
4/1/2020 05:16:33 pm
I thought that was a very creative story, and i liked that you made the player name Covid and his number 19!
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Mateo Alvarez
4/2/2020 01:28:01 pm
When I grow up, I want to be the most famous swimmer that ever lived. My coaches train me both humorously and furiously to make me the best swimmer in my class. After swim practice one day, I saw an invention on TV that can make anyone an Olympic swimmer instantly. This invention was called instaflips, it made you swim very fast. Instaflips had various types and speeds, they could either attach to your feet or hands.
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Mateo Alvarez
4/2/2020 01:29:07 pm
Kinda late
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Madison Imala
4/5/2020 02:57:52 pm
There was once a famous but nervous lady named Helene. She had an interview in front of a group of adults. It was about an election. The tension in her arms was from the silly invention that she was scared to talk about. The conversation in front of the group of adults was about the furious robot creation that she made. As she was showing them how the “ robot” worked, the robot did not work, it shut down and Helene got furious. It didn’t go as well in her imagination.But to herself she said next time she is going to envision it a lot better.
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Madison Imala
4/5/2020 07:26:00 pm
There was once a famous but nervous lady named Helene. She had an interview in front of a group of adults. It was about an election. The tension in her arms was from the silly invention that she was scared to talk about. The conversation in front of the group of adults was about the furious robot creation that she made. As she was showing them how the “ robot” worked. The robot did not work it shut down and Helene got furious. It didn’t go as well in her imagination.But to herself she said next time she is going to envision it a lot better.
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